If anybody's interested: 1.5 page PDF

solid scott, great job boy!

I remember you telling me about putting your arms inside a beast on a cold night's hunt... though this story ended somewhat differently. Good stuff.

Punchy, I like it. I can see how some might argue that the reversal is too quick but without a laboured mystical experience or something equally annoying it's hard to imagine how that could be drawn out effectively. You might be able to trim out a bit of the descriptiveness to make the first section a bit snappier to keep the flow a bit more consistent but that's just nitpickery.

Well done! :beer:

nice job, scotty!

//edit: just read through the other thread.

disturbing...yet intriguing and mysterious.

I liked how you switched the focus to the sound of the gun versus moving forward to quickly. Well written.

disturbing